Feedback 2

This week I took 5 photos of my magazine from the computer on my mobile phone. I took these photos home and showed them to my parents and a few friends, this was the feedback I gathered. 


Feedback from Parents:

Mum: "Ross' new magazine design is very different from his original idea. I believe that the changes he has made are made for the better as there is a new found dynamism in his work, whereas before his ideas were good but fairly plain. The only criticism I would make is that all his images are very similar and aren't too eye catching."

Dad: "I like Ross' new magazine design. In all fairness I from what I remember him saying I preferred his original idea but I do think that this final magazine he will use is of a high standard. When speaking to him about this, Ross said his first colour scheme consisted of mostly of blue, and obviously in comparison this colour scheme is much opposed. But I do like this colour scheme of yellow and black, rather than the idea of blue. I do think his imaging is too the same and needs to be changed."




Feedback from Friends:

Friend 1: "His magazine is very decent. I'm not too sure on the colour scheme of black and yellow, personally I would change to red and white. I do however like his text style and use of font as they are quite easy on the eye and don't pose a harsh or harsher feel. I spoke to Ross' mum about his magazine and we both agreed that he imaging is far too similar. Ross has asked me if I could be used as a model in a photoshoot. I am more than happy help and will try and make sure Ross gets some decent images for his magazine."

Friend 2: " The last time Ross showed me his magazine ideas and told me what he would like to do was quite a while ago. From what I remember, his design has changed drastically. Most notably he has changed the colour scheme and images. I take media at A-level also, we have to carry out the same task as well, and in comparison to mine I would say Ross' is much better than mine and a lot more developed. If Ross uses this idea well, I reckon he can receive high marks."